Angeliki – Blog 3

Josie’s dad Micheal Andretti’s attitude towards Josie is calm and understanding. When having an argument he keeps a level head while trying to talk to Josie. Micheal is although an opinionated man he is very polite and formal. In chapter 6 when Josie met Micheal she wanted nothing got to do with him but as she got to know him there bond was getting stronger and stronger.

 

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One thought on “Angeliki – Blog 3

  1. any numbers under 10 need to be written out e.g. Chapter six. Your points are good and you have a good topic sentence. A quote would have been good to support your points.

    Also …. “there bond was getting stronger and stronger.” is THEIR BOND not there and try and avoid using get or got

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